Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is no doubt about
vaccination
is very important to children for some of the diseases. While there are many benefits to getting
vaccination
of children against preventable diseases and
also
dangerous to some of the diseases. I would agree with the former view. According to the doctor's suggestion, children who are less than 6 years, they do not have a sufficient
immunity
system. So doctors suggest to do the certain
vaccination
.
For example
, chicken pox, dengue, malaria kind of diseases need to do shots for kids. Normal fever, cold and cough does not require any
vaccination
. Based on the
immunity
power of the body, doctors will suggest for the
vaccination
. The government will provide most of the vaccinations for children based on the seasonal diseases. On the other side, for a normal disease or regular diseases are not required any
vaccination
. If you go for the
vaccination
, children's
immunity
power will reduce. Based on the white blood cells,
immunity
power will calculate.
For example
, children will get tired and got fever with
this
case no need to go for
vaccination
and it's a danger to kids. So here you need to wait for two to three days to take to cure the fever. If it is continuously the same temperature for children,
then
consult a doctor and take require medicine not for the shots. You should use prescribed medicine. At the conclusion,
vaccination
is necessary for seasonal diseases and contaminations and unnecessary for normal diseases. I agree for inoculation is necessary for kids and need to improve the immune system.
Submitted by Sreenivasulu on

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