A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The problem of animal rights has provoked in the recent year.
Discussion
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The discussion
has
centered
being or placed in the center
centred
whether animals ought not to suffer from the exploitation of human or humans have right to use animals in their needs including provision of food and research. Both two sides are discussed before I give my opinion.
On the other hand
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, animals play an important role in research because that can ensure the precise of products or study before publishing and discourage the least other sides.
For example
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, in complex surgery, doctors or experts need to do experiments on animals in order to have some results or action and consider before taking action on human.
Besides
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testing on human in cosmetics industry is banned so testing on animals is the best choice.
Moreover
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, animals are
main resource
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the main resource
for food because they provide a certain source of nutrition and energy. Especially, in some areas
such
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as the ethnic group, the locals having a low salary job must hunt animals so as to manage their life.
On the other hand
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, it is acceptable that animals who are born and exist have the same rights as
human
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humans
a human
. They
should not be behave
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should not behave
badly and should live with humans to support each other. It is proved that when humans grow up a pet and live together, it helps people to reduce stress and the
capicity
capability to perform or produce
capacity
of cancer. In the world, there are a lot of
situation
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situations
that doctors use
animals
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animal
animals'
treatment. When patients suffer from disorders or expression,
unability
the quality of being able to provide good service
usability
inability
nobility
, they live with a pet who enable them to have
better life
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a better life
and become more optimistic.
Besides
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, animals create the natural environments. If human continue hunting animals
such
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as wild animals and destroy forests, the nature and the fresh air will disappear, leading to lose the nature and the pollution.
As a result
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, misusing
animals not
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animals, not
only lose the
nature but
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nature, but
also
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make people behave
unnormally
in an abnormal manner
abnormally
normally
. In conclusion, as
for
to a considerable degree; very much
far
as I am concerned that animals have rights to live and humans should respect them.
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, people can limit the use of animals
on
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in
for
research and replace food from meat to vegetables and vitamins.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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