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Your employer has recently allowed some employees to work remotely from home. You would also like to work from home. Write a letter to the HR manager for permission to work from home for the next six months. In your letter: • mention why you are writing • explain why you would like to work from home • say how this can benefit you and the company No need for address Start with dear Sir/Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Jagatheesan Manoharan and I am currently employed as a senior research scientist in the Chemistry department. I recently discovered that employees are allowed to
work
 from home for
few
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a few
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months
 and I am writing
this
 letter to gain permission to
work
 from home for the next six
months
. The opportunity to
work
 from home , especially during the next six
months
 would be a great deal for me as my wife is travelling abroad for her
work
 purposes and I have to take care of my kids and mother. As I have completed the research analysis, the next six
months
 are going to be mostly data analysis which could be easily performed on my
work
 computer and could be forwarded remotely to my manager
while
 I could minimize time on travel and be involved in household duties.
In addition
, it will reduce my benefits
such
 as vacation, travelling and food coverage which could minimize the expenses on your side. It will help me to focus on my
work
 and house which will minimize the stress and increase productivity compared to working on-site. I hope you will consider my request positively and initiate a plan with the management soon. Thanks for your kind consideration. Sincerely Yours, Jagatheesan
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task achievement
The letter opened with a clear purpose and maintained a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is crucial for formal correspondence.
coherence and cohesion
The writer structured the letter sensibly, with each paragraph addressing a specific point of the prompt.
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