Both The Poor And The Rich Find Accessibility Into University Difficult

#accessibility #university

Some people

thinks

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think

that

its

it is

it's

difficult for both the rich and the poor people to find it difficult to get the accessibility into universities but I

am not quite agree

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do not quite agree

with the thought. I believe that, people coming from solvent family get more advantages comparing to those who come from

poor family

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poor families

a poor family

To begin

with, being born in a rich family you will get better

finantial

involving financial matters

financial

financially

support that you can afford good institutions if you

arn't

are not or (in questions) am not

aren't

good in education. All private institutions can offer them

option

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the option

because of having the

abilility

the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment

ability

to pay huge amount of money.

Also their

Accept comma addition

Also, their

parents having

good realtionship

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a good relationship

good relationship

good relationships

with

governing body

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the governing body

or committee members of colleges or universities so that they

also

get other facilities. On the other side, it's always a hard job for young people with no money so they have to strive hard and

also

must maintain good academic records. If

the

people in general

they

fail to win scholarship from universities it's impossible for them to

contintue

continue a certain state, condition, or activity

continue

what not match the scenario with

finantially

from a financial point of view

financially

solvent guy. Statistics provides that people from economically weak family are suffering more drop out rate from college

thato

pointing out something

that

univn

not even or uniform as e.g. in shape or texture

uneven

rich family because of inability to pay higher

tution

a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)

tuition

fee. To recapitulate

, i

it is

it's

ts easier for a child to get admitted

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Both The Poor And The Rich Find Accessibility Into University Difficult

Fully explain your ideas

The picture illustrates the data about the amount of guests who traveled 4 various genres of travel industries between 1981 and 1999 in the UK.

In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in an office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree?

In some countries, there has been an increase in adverstisements that try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys and other items. Parents often argue that these announcements are unfair. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.