A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are more and more opposing arguments on

animals

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animal

exploitation whether

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exploitation, whether

it should be prevented to give animals the same rights as humans or it is automatically to take benefits for the various

need

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needs

. In my point of view, both opinions have its right's and wrong's which will be included in

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writing. It is true that animals should not be

explited

developed or used to greatest advantage

exploited

too

serious

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seriously

by people.

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,

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they do not have the ability to speak clear language, think logically or develop the society, they have emotions and feelings, and should be given various rights as

human

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humans

a human

.

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, animals have great responsibility

with

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to

their family, their fellow-creature and their inhabiting environment which is the Earth that we are living in.

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, these natural missions that they were given since birth should not be taken away. We should let animals protect their family, raise their child, maintain their ancestry and have necessary effects on the living environment.

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, there should be

equalization

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equalized

for all living

creature

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creatures

. We are living in a society which teaches us to love, protect and develop

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with

each others.

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should not be

putted

put into a certain place or abstract location

put

into practice not only. For

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reason, they should be avoided to experience lost, pain and other physical or mental agony that

are created

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is created

by human for human to human but

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human to animals. We should propagandize the speech of loving and treating nice to animals to everyone, especially children.

On the other hand

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, we

can not

can not

cannot

avoid employing animals to full-fill our society's basic needs.

the

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The

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reason to explain for

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is because of the

importatnce

the quality of being important and worthy of note

importance

impotence

of

animals' contribution

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the animals' contribution

to the motivation of social. Their impacts play an important role to help

invent or

someone who is the first to think of or make something

inventor

study new discoveries in science and many other areas.

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,

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the existence of

animal

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the animal

animals

is very important, we must maintain our ancestry too. The human body needs to be provided with nutrients that comes from animals' meat or other parts of their body to live balanced and healthily. Animals' exploitation is a huge source of supplying protein, fatty substance, vitamins or medical treatment to human. These

uses

a person who makes use of a thing; someone who uses or employs something

users

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have greater and more useful effects on the human body than artificial products.

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but not least, the use of animals' skin, fur or skeletons creates

higher

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high

quality and long-lasting expiration the supplies for furnitures, clothes and other important items in human life. In conclusion, according to my experiences, I think that the exploitation of human on animals should happen at a safety level to prevent animals from extinctions, diseases and causing contrast harm to people. Animal employment is a gifted facility to human right. We should have kind of treatment

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of

animals while taking what we need.