Some people think that when recruiting companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Many people argue that organisation should focus on hiring people with

higher creative ability

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higher creative abilities

and are able to perform without supervision, while others advocate that nowadays

team

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players who support decisions are more apt for any

business

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This

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essay will

agrees

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agree

lateral statement

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the literal statement

the lateral statement

a lateral statement

as with new technological inventions we have all the creativity we need to run a

company

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company, however

however

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we have fewer people left who are still motivated to work in a

team

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and adheres to the process. Nowadays, we see

majority

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the majority

a majority

of people generating new ideas to increase

business

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in the organisation,

this

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overall gives profit to the

company

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company, however

however

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it takes a toil on that one person as he/she has to work extended hours to prove innovation worthiness.

This

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is because these

set

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sets

of people are not open to share their success with anyone and are often individual player.

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mostly creative designers

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the most creative designers

most creative designers

would work individually, the whole project

is totally depended

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totally depends

on their

availablity

the quality of being at hand when needed

availability

such

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situations often have negative impacts

aswell

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as well

on the

business

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like too much dependence on independent workers disappointment

also

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, if the person is not able to understand the project or is on sick leave or having any

extengency

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Thus

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, working alone is better for an individual,

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however companies

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however, companies

also

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should have varied set different people to perform a task. These different people includes

team

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players and the one who

adhere

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adheres

to the rules to get the things done, which is overall beneficial for the organisation

business

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acumen.

This

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group often focuses on larger projects with assigned project manager to motivate them daily,

also

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there are some auditors who review that things are going according to the rule book.

Such

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people

does not have

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do not have

any creative block, they are good in their

montonous

tediously repetitious or lacking in variety

monotonous

mountainous

mountains

working style.

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, in factories we see many employees working on the

converyer

a person who conveys (carries or transmits)

conveyer

conveyor

belt, most of them enjoy that type of working because it does not involve excessive thinking and is

time bound job

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a time bound job

. It is evident that it is

easy job

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an easy job

, though we have now scarcity of

team

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players. Now we have more self sorted creative who wants to do everything alone. In conclusion, Human have become

workoholic

person with a compulsive need to work

workaholic

workaholics

and have forgotten how to work in groups with different ethnicity and

that is

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reason

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the reason

a reason

we see economical crashes. To sustain a

business

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company

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a company

needs

team

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player, group people who follow the orders of the one in the senior

chair

the work of providing treatment for or attending to someone or something

care

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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