If children behave badly, parents should be punished. To what extent do you agree?

Children learn from their parents and they tend to act as they see from their parents.

However

, it is often argued that parents should be disciplined for children’s bad

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

Although

I partly agree that parents should be punished due to their children because there may be cases where parents are accomplices. On the one hand, parents are responsible for the children’s upbringing.

Also

, nowadays, we see a wide freedom in

this

act and children do what they want and what they see in society.

For instance

, if a child bullies in school and tries to intimidate weak colleagues, it would be the parents’

responsible

Suggestion

responsibility

to reeducate their child.

Therefore

, it is an example that they are not guilty, and it is not necessary to discipline parents.

On the other hand

, sometimes parents do bad things

with

Suggestion

or attend children, or they know what children do. These families come from poor areas and do not have

education

Suggestion

an education

, so that they give to the

generation the same things,

such

as crimes, rape or robberies.

Therefore

, here parents should be punished. As a conclusion, mostly I think that the children should be disciplined

instead

of their parents, because it is their responsibility.

Sat Sep 28 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

201 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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