Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologize for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue

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Dear Emily, ,Sorry it's taken me so long to write to you but at ,

last

I put pen to paper to explain why I haven't returned that DIY

book

I borrowed from you. To be honest, I've been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up that I damaged the

book

accidentally. I'm so very sorry. I know how important that

book

is to you as it was passed down from your late father. What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter about DIY plumbing when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the

book

. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at the time. I've sent the

book

away to be repaired. I didn't realise that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back

week and

then

I'll send it on to you. Again, I'm so sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me. Best wishes John

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Linking words
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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

184 words

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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologize for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue

Many cities are now turning parks and farmland into new housing developments

Some people say the professional workers such as, doctors, nurses and teachers, who make greater contribution to the society, should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

The only way to improve road safety is to impose severe punishment for driving offences. Do you agree or disagree?

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Despite the growing number of gyms and fitness centres, more and more people are leading a sedentary lifestyle in the modern society. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest