The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.
The line graph illustrates data about the
share
price
change of Outokumpu companies, between January 2006 and December 2010.
Overall
, what stand
out from the graph is that the Change the verb form
stands
share
price
reached a maximum of around 30 euros
during mid 2006
. Add a hyphen
mid-2006
However
, In 2008, the share
price
of Outokumpu companies fell below 10 euros
, which is least
in the given Correct article usage
the least
period
.
As regards, share
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the share
price
of Outokumpu started around
13 Change preposition
at around
euros
at the start of the period
, then
it sharply went up to 30 euros
by mid 2006
which was Add a hyphen
mid-2006
maximum
during the given Correct article usage
the maximum
period
.
Since then
the price
significantly dropped to over 20 euros
by June 2007 followed by a dramatic increase of around 10 euros
by the end of 2007. From the start of 2008, share
Add an article
the share
price
plunged by nearly 25 euros
, reaching the minimum value of over 5 euros
in roughly 5 months. Subsequently
, it gradually increased to 15 euros
by early 2008, from
Correct word choice
and from
then
marginal increases and decreases, the stock price
reached nearly the same value as it is at the start of the period
in December 2006.Submitted by Goutham on
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