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A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest possible solutions to the problem.

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Dear Gina,
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 week, I received a letter from you. I am really sorry to hear that you are in the same trouble in which I was 2 years ago. Being in that
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, I can really understand your
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 and happy to advise you to get past the
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. When I was in final year of college, I had a dispute with the hostel
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 regarding the
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quality
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. Being the head
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 committee, I had to raise the voice in favour of other students stayed in the girls hostel. When I explained
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 about the
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 of
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 served to the students and how the
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 was being prepared,
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 of taking
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 on workers, she took
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 against me and expelled me from the college with no reason. After reading your letter, I immediately understood the
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 in you are right now. To get out of
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, you need to write a letter to the head of department. Clearly explain them about everything. Tell them the concerns of students raised on the
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 of
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.
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 list down the bullet points which you have discussed with
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 to improve on the
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. With no doubt, mention about the
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 taken by the
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 after hearing all
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. After hearing all
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, they will immediately take
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 on the
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 and immediately allow you to join the college from the same day. I hope
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 helps you. Yours faithfully, Tina

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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