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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

#fathers #home #care #children #mothers #work #development
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It is true that men are increasingly likely to take on the role of househusband, and while more women than ever are breadwinners for the families. There are several reasons for
this
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, and I believe it to be a positive development. In recent years, parents must have to adapt to various changed in
society
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. The equal rights movement
have made
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has made
 great progress, and it’s normal for females
to pursue
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pursue
 a higher education and find a high paying job. It has been accepted by
society
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 that men can stay at home and take care of the household.
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 of higher cost of living in urban, couples need to work and save money before starting their families.
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, when couples have children, its couples who decide who will take care of
home
that male; objective male pronoun
him
 and who will work based on their preference or based on their earning capabilities. In my view, changes that are described above are seen as progress, and we should be happy to live in a
society
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 in which both men and women have equal rights, and in which women are not put under pressure to quit their job and take care of children. Equally, it seems only fair that men are should be free to leave their job and assume children’s responsibilities if
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 is what they wish to do so. Couples should be left to make their own decisions about which role there are keen on taking it up according to their circumstances and needs. In conclusion, the changing roles with men and women are a result of wider changes in
society
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, and I believe that these developments are desirable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breadwinner
  • caregiving
  • paternal leave
  • societal perceptions
  • gender roles
  • flexible working conditions
  • personal preference
  • father-child relationship
  • emotional and social development
  • household responsibilities
  • career opportunities
  • professional achievements
  • balanced parenting
  • earning potential
  • social stigma
  • societal pressure
  • discrimination
  • traditional mindsets
  • resentment
  • adjustment
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