Nowadays,we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Today
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many cities around the world face an increasing amount of
garbage
produced by citizens.I think the main reasons for
this
are consumerism and over packaged goos and it certainly needs to be dealt with. One reason why the amount of rubbish produced is rising is the consumerist lifestyle of many people today which has led them to buy and consume more products
such
as food
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clothes and home appliances.
As a result
, they often have to throw away their old belonging to make room for the new ones.
Furthermore
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most products today have packages and boxes that need to be thrown away.
For instance
, most dishes are wrapped in nylon covers
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bubble wraps and cardboard boxes, which together can fill a large rubbish bay. To decrease the amount of
garbage
, governments can legislate laws to limit the
garbage
produced by household to a certain level
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say a kilogram everyday.
As a result
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people would definitely try to buy only the things they need to avoid throwing away too much. Another possible solution would be to encourage producers to improve their packaging techniques and use less packaging material like paper and plastic.
For instance
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if
government
Suggestion
the government
ask
Suggestion
asks
dish producers to use printed and colourful bubble wraps
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they can act as protective covers as well as eye-catching packages, which means the buyers will only have to throw away one wrapper. In conclusion
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the reasons behind the rise in waste production include consumerism and product package and
possilbe
capable of happening or existing
possible
solutions are laws to restrict household
garbage
as well as encouraging industries to use improved packaging.

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