More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of study abroad outweigh the drawbacks.

A large number of students
are preferring
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prefer
to study abroad these days for the continuation of their
further
studies.
Although
there are numerous advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas
,
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,
I think that the positive aspects of studying in
foreign land
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a foreign land
outweigh
negative aspects
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the negative aspects
. When students choose foreign colleges and universities for pursuing their
further
education
, they get a chance to explore diverse form of
education
accompanied by better courses which
consequently
enhances their academic performance in one hand and overall growth in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
hand paving way for better opportunities. Youths can gradually live their dream life.
Furthermore
, students get a chance to explore cultural diversity as they interact with students from other countries.
For example
, a huge number of Nepalese students migrate to
Australia where
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Australia, where
they amalgamate with people belonging to various countries like India, Sri Lanka, China e.t.
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perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
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and learn different cultural and religious beliefs, food habits, linguistic variation etc.
On the other hand
, when a large number of youths leave own's country for higher
education
outside
,
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,
huge amount of
nation's economy
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the nation's economy
a nation's economy
is spent on foreign educational institutions degrading country's economy to
great extent
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a great extent
. Country 's financial condition and development are
further
affected by the scarcity of skilled, energetic and creative youth manpower. In conclusion,
although
there are some drawbacks off studying abroad, emphasis should be made in its numerous benefits and decision about
further
education
should be taken
accordingly
for overall progress.

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