More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of study abroad outweigh the drawbacks.

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A large number of students

are preferring

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prefer

to study abroad these days for the continuation of their

further

studies.

Although

there are numerous advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas

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I think that the positive aspects of studying in

foreign land

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a foreign land

outweigh

negative aspects

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the negative aspects

. When students choose foreign colleges and universities for pursuing their

further

education

, they get a chance to explore diverse form of

education

accompanied by better courses which

consequently

enhances their academic performance in one hand and overall growth in

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

hand paving way for better opportunities. Youths can gradually live their dream life.

Furthermore

, students get a chance to explore cultural diversity as they interact with students from other countries.

For example

, a huge number of Nepalese students migrate to

Australia where

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Australia, where

they amalgamate with people belonging to various countries like India, Sri Lanka, China e.t.

perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight

See

and learn different cultural and religious beliefs, food habits, linguistic variation etc.

On the other hand

, when a large number of youths leave own's country for higher

education

outside

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huge amount of

nation's economy

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the nation's economy

a nation's economy

is spent on foreign educational institutions degrading country's economy to

great extent

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a great extent

. Country 's financial condition and development are

further

affected by the scarcity of skilled, energetic and creative youth manpower. In conclusion,

although

there are some drawbacks off studying abroad, emphasis should be made in its numerous benefits and decision about

further

education

should be taken

accordingly

for overall progress.

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