Successful sports professionals can earn a lot of more money than people in other important professions. Some people think that this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, in the professional sports games a lot of sportsmen earn a huge
salary
or get expensive gifts from sponsors. Use synonyms
However
, while some people believe that paying a huge Linking Words
money
to athletes is Use synonyms
increase
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increasing
government
authority and present Use synonyms
country
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power
in the world, I strongly agree with those who think these Use synonyms
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money
need spend poor people and increase Suggestion
monies
moneys
salary
teachers, doctors.
On the one hand, it could argue that paying huge fees to sportsmen who present Use synonyms
country
in the Olympic games have been motivated them to achieve a Use synonyms
highest
result in the competition time. Suggestion
higher
First
and foremost, these results show Linking Words
real
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the real power
power
of Use synonyms
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country
the world level and some people think is enemy starting afraid of them, so will not attack them in the future. Without these sport competitions, we would Suggestion
the country
countries
not be able show
them our Suggestion
not be able to show
power
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, some Linking Words
also
argued that athletes spend a lot of time and Linking Words
power
to prepare these games Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
Olympic
or the World championship. Suggestion
Olympus
Thus
, Linking Words
government
and sponsors have to compensate Use synonyms
them their efforts
.
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them in their efforts
them with their efforts
However
, I side with those who think that paying a huge Linking Words
salary
to the sportsmen does not make any sense as Use synonyms
Use synonyms
government
has concentrated more for improving to Suggestion
the government
social status
of poor people. Unfortunately, in the world a large amount of people who need to be aided in buy food or clothes and Suggestion
the social status
number
of these people grow every day. In fact, Suggestion
a number
Use synonyms
government
Suggestion
the government
give
expensive gifts or Suggestion
gives
money
to the Olympic sportsmen which spends Use synonyms
this
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money
to luxury life. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
government
has to spend Use synonyms
this
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money
to the social sectors Use synonyms
such
as increase Linking Words
salary
of teachers and doctors. These professions give more benefit to our society than athletes in the Olympic game. Without these people working whole their Use synonyms
live
, we will not be able to treat illness or educate children in the schools and universities.
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lives
life
To
conclusion, Suggestion
In
although
sportsmen present our Linking Words
country
in the famous sports games, Use synonyms
government
Use synonyms
need
to concentrate more to social sectors and support poor people. Suggestion
needs
Therefore
, on balance, I believe support people who educate us or treat illness more important than sportsmen.Linking Words
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