You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Pramod, I hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. It has been a long time since we met. I'm writing

this

letter to inform you that we have moved to a new home. As you know, I am living in a joint family including my parents, wife, grandparents and two children. The space of

old

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the old

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house wasn't enough for my joint family. Another reason is that I want to purchase a new car in the next month and there was not a car

parking

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park

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. If I am talking about a new house, there are four bedrooms attached with bathrooms, a kitchen, a huge living room and a garden where we can spend our leisure time. I would like to arrange a small party for my family members and close friends,

as a

result

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they can visit a new house. I really like to invite you to

this

party. Hoping to see you at the party. Yours lovingly, Urvesh

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coherence cohesion

Your letter structure is clear, but try adding more linking words to enhance the flow between sentences and paragraphs.

task achievement

Your response meets all parts of the task question. However, provide more details about your experiences in the new neighborhood for a richer response.

coherence cohesion

Your letter begins with a warm and appropriate greeting, and concludes with a friendly closing that fits the task perfectly.

task achievement

You have maintained a suitable writing tone throughout the letter, striking a friendly and informative balance.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

165 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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