You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Pramod, I hope

this

Linking Words

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. It has been a long time since we met. I'm writing

this

Linking Words

letter to inform you that we have moved to a new home. As you know, I am living in a joint family including my parents, wife, grandparents and two children. The space of

old

Add an article

the old

show examples

house wasn't enough for my joint family. Another reason is that I want to purchase a new car in the next month and there was not a car

parking

Replace the word

park

show examples

. If I am talking about a new house, there are four bedrooms attached with bathrooms, a kitchen, a huge living room and a garden where we can spend our leisure time. I would like to arrange a small party for my family members and close friends,

as a

Linking Words

result

Add the comma(s)

result,

show examples

they can visit a new house. I really like to invite you to

this

Linking Words

party. Hoping to see you at the party. Yours lovingly, Urvesh

Darshita@8612Tue Oct 29 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion

Your letter structure is clear, but try adding more linking words to enhance the flow between sentences and paragraphs.

task achievement

Your response meets all parts of the task question. However, provide more details about your experiences in the new neighborhood for a richer response.

coherence cohesion

Your letter begins with a warm and appropriate greeting, and concludes with a friendly closing that fits the task perfectly.

task achievement

You have maintained a suitable writing tone throughout the letter, striking a friendly and informative balance.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Some people today believe that the world's increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that the world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world's economy and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It has become a debate on whether it is economically feasible for the human population to
5
band
Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects . Others say it causes the loss of national identities.Discuss both of these views and give your own opnion.
Society has different views about the positive effects of global trade and cultural transactions between nations, some people think it's beneficial. Whereas there are a few who feel that the identity of the country may fade away through such exchanges, increasing trade and acculturation between countries has advantages and disadvantages. Let me discuss both views and give my personal opinion.
5.5
band
Some people believe that professional sportsmen and women are paid too much money nowadays in relation to their usefulness to society. Do you agree or disagree?
How useful are sports players to our society? Do they earn too much money? This essay will discuss these questions.
6.5
band
More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantanges? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no doubt that these days a lot of parents prefer to have children at a later age in their lives.
<4
band
These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children’s behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently the evidences of crime and abuse have been increased, hence theose have a negative impact on children's behaviour, in this essay I shall discuss my point of view according this subject, also I shall give my opinion

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects . Others say it causes the loss of national identities.Discuss both of these views and give your own opnion.

Some people believe that professional sportsmen and women are paid too much money nowadays in relation to their usefulness to society. Do you agree or disagree?

More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantanges? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children’s behavior. Do you agree or disagree?