Juvenile crime is attributed to the violence in media. Do you agree or disagree? What are the solutions?

#crime #violence #media

MEDIA PEOPLE DIPICTING MORE

CRIME

ATTEMTED BY OFFSPRINGS.

THIS

ESSAY CONCURE AND DISCUSS VARIOUS SOLITIONS TO TAKLE

THIS

PROBLEM. TO START WITH, FROM INDIVIDUAL POINT OF VIEW, CHIOLDREN DO

CRIME

BECAUSE OF LACK OF KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING OF LIFE. SO, PARENT SHOULD HAVE MORE CONCERN ABOUT THEIR CHILD, DO THEIR PROPER UPBRINGING AND TEACH THEM HOW TO BE A GOOD MEMBER OF THE SOCIETYAS WELL AS A CITIZEN. FOR AN EXAMPLE, MY NEIGHBOR'S SON ATTEMTED ROBBARY WHEN HE WAS 15 YEAR OLD BECAUSE THEY DID NOT TAUGHT THEIR CHILD ABOUT BAD BEHAVIOUR AND WHAT ARE THE RESULTS OF THE

CRIME

. SO PARENTS PARENTS SHOULD GUIDE THEM BY BEING FRIENDLY AND OPEN-MINDED AS TODAY'S GENERATION. BY

THIS

THERE WILL BE A LESSER CRIMES.

MOREOVER

, GOVERNMENT

ALSO

DO SOME PROGRAMS LIKE REHABILITIATIONCEMTERS IN WHICH OFFENDERS CAN GET INFORMATION ABOIT GOOD BEHAVIOUR AND HOW TO LEAVE THEY RONG HABITS. TO ELABORATE, AUTHORITY SHOULD IMPLIMENT RULES LIKE REHABILITATION S MANDATORY FOR ALL CRIMINALS AND FOR ANYKIND OF CRIMES. FOR AN INSTANCE, IF ONE IS A MURDERER AND OTHER HAVE DONE ROBBARY THAT THERE ARE NO EXCEMPTION FOR RUBBERS JUST BECAUSE THEY ARE JUST A THIEF.BY

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WHO AL ARE ALREADY GOT A NAME PLAYTE OF CRIMINALS CAN HAVE A CHANCE OF BEING RESPONSIBLE MEMBER OF THE NATION.

IN ADDITION

THIS

ALSO

THERE SHOPULD BE SOME RESTRICTIONS FOR MEDIAN PEOPLE. TO ILLUSTRATE, LAWS IN WHICH THEY HAVE THE BOUNDRIES AND DUTYIES MENTION. SO THAT THEY KNOW WHICH NEW THEY CAN PUBLISH AND WHAT NOT. FOR AN EXAMPLE

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OF THEY GET NEWS ABOUT ONE SCHOOLER HHAS DONE SOME THIEFT.

THEN

THEY ARE NOT ALLOWED TO TELECAST

THIS

NEWS ON THE TELEVISION. BECAUSE IT WILL INFLUENCE A MANY OTHER STUDENTS TOO.BUT IF THEYB GET INFORMATION LIKE RAPE HAS ATTEMTED BY 25 YEAR OLD BOY,

THIS

DEFINATELY THEY SHOULD SHOW BECAUSE

THIS

MAKES PUBLIV AWARE OF

CRIME

. TO SUM UP,

HOWEVER

IT IS TRUE THAT MEDIA SHOULD HAVE RIGHT TO PUBLISH ANY

CRIME

BUT I THINK WITH JUVENILE THEY SHOULD BE MORE CAREFFUL ABOUT WHEN AND WHTA TO SHOW. EVRYONE IS RESPONSIBLE TO MAKE SOME CHANGES IN THE COUNTRY.

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