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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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It is undeniable that due to the recent revolutionary innovations in medical technology, the rate to live longer has increased. Several affluent nations having more older
people resulting
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people, resulting
 in hopelessness among their new generations
,
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,
as they are unable to find opportunities.
This
 essay will discuss the issues that are being faced by humans due to
this
 and the attempts can be made to dwindle the ratio of
older population
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the older population
. To embark on, In wealthy countries, it has clearly observed that the ratio of death among aged locals is risen
.
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.
The facilities provided by their government to senior citizens
has made
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have made
 their lives better.
However
, it is an aggravating situation for their graduates
to find
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find
 jobs because many companies are still reluctant to give them opportunities and persistent with their old age employees. According to
detailed survey
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a detailed survey
 in China the average of
hiring
(law) a proceeding (usually by a court) where evidence is taken for the purpose of determining an issue of fact and reaching a decision based on that evidence
hearing
 youth is only 30%. It's an aggravating situation
for
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to
 the higher authorities and irreparable loss
for
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of
 the new blood who spends huge amount of money in their education. There are many measures to diminish the influence of older persons
such
 as, the retirement policy needs to be designed by the lawmakers among
such
 developed parts of the world.
This
 will bring fresh faces in organisations.
Furthermore
, it must be an onus of those experienced employees to shift their expertise to new hirings during the
last
 year of their duties.
Moreover
, companies should design their employment criteria in
such
 a way where an aged worker should work as a mentor for the inexperienced worker before he retires. To sum up, it's inevitable and natural process of the world where new faces
comes
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come
 up and older
ones
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one
 perishes. Experience of life is irrefutably a fact and that must be shifted to new ones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average life expectancy
  • developed world
  • increase
  • individuals
  • society
  • personal goals
  • ambitions
  • quality of life
  • leisure
  • recreation
  • healthcare costs
  • challenges
  • healthcare system
  • ageing population
  • shortage
  • available workers
  • economy
  • retirement planning
  • healthy lifestyles
  • investing
  • social support systems
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