People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

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All the human beings are of
different nature
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a different nature
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their interests are not the same. A
few
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little
love to sing while others like listening to the music. In the same way, people attend the colleges and universities have different respective prospective or purposes. Mainly people go to
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places for their better
career which
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career, which
dramatically affect their future
life
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, to gain the knowledge and to be a good human being, while some attend colleges for enjoyment and to get rid of their homes. But I feel that Colleges and universities should be regarded as a place of worship which give us the sense of good living, spread knowledge and enlighten our
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life
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lives
from darkness.
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of all, if we discuss rich parent's youngsters, most of them come to colleges for their time passing and making ruckuses in
college
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. All the day they make havoc everywhere. Studying is just a trivial matter for them. They have no worries about money wastage or future scope.
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students get enrolled in colleges for their own willingness to fulfil their ambitions of entertainment etc., but it never means that all are alike. If we look on the other side of the coin, there are some students who are even not able to fill their
college
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fee due to lack of sources but they are dedicated
to learn
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to learning
and work hard. They want to study hard to become a successful person.
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students attend the colleges and universities for studying mainly because they just focus on their motto of
life
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. Enjoyment and other activities are meagre to them.
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,
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other types of students are there who we can say in middle-class family
students which
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students, which
can be of mixed behavioural response regarding admission in colleges as either for making friends
,
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,
fun and study
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. By participating in different
college
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events they can fill their
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life
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lives
with enthusiasm and charm because they are totally not focused for only study or totally for enjoyment.
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Hence they
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Hence, they
are involved in overall
college
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or university atmosphere. On the behalf of above, it did not mean that these particular types of students are liable strictly
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for
respective activities in colleges but the majority of them are in
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manner. In the end, we can conclude that colleges and universities are for the social and individual
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well being
of all. They help to build our character. Every student can get the characters of bonhomie, candid behaviour, bright future and spreading
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by proper studying sincerely and overall body growth by participating in extra co-curricular activities of the
college
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.

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