Teenagers should not be allowed to use mobile phones at school. To what extent do you agree?

In the modern world, mobile phones are common among the children. Using mobile
divices
an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'
devices
device's
device
in the school has become common
problem
Suggestion
problematic
. I
belives
accept as true; take to be true
believe
use
Suggestion
the use
of
mobie
migratory
mobile
divices
an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'
devices
while studying should be
restrickted
subject to restriction or subjected to restriction
restricted
beacse
for the reason that; on account of
because
base
peace
it is
distract
Suggestion
distracting
to the proper education.
Mobile phone
Suggestion
The mobile phone
is very
importatnt
of great significance or value
important
equipment
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
is
use
full for
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
to communicate with their parents and become safe.
However now a days
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However, nowadays
However nowadays
, modern
students teenagers
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students, teenagers
used to watch movies and other
inapropriate
not suitable for a particular occasion etc
inappropriate
thing during the school hours. For
aqusition
the act of contracting or assuming or acquiring possession of something
acquisition
acquisitions
of
knowlage
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
consantration
the strength of a solution; number of molecules of a substance in a given volume
concentration
esential
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
. Some
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
can be
addicated
compulsively or physiologically dependent on something habit-forming
addicted
educated
abdicated
to negative things like
unaprppriate
not suitable for a particular occasion etc
inappropriate
videos.
Also
then
can be
adicted
compulsively or physiologically dependent on something habit-forming
addicted
attested
edited
to the
socal
relating to human society and its members
social
media sites and they will
wast
spend thoughtlessly; throw away
waste
their
presios
characterized by feeling or showing fond affection for
precious
time
perfoming
the performance of a part or role in a drama
performing
useless things.
How ever
Suggestion
However
mobie
a form of entertainment that enacts a story by sound and a sequence of images giving the illusion of continuous movement
movie
move
mobile
divises
an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'
devices
can be
usefull
being of use or service
useful
for
Suggestion
to
improve
knowlage
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
while studying by connecting to the internet. Using
Youtube
Suggestion
YouTube
and
Wickpidia
a web-based encyclopedia with content contributed by volunteers; most articles can be edited by anyone
Wikipedia
students can explore more
knowladge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
. Communication with
perent
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
is one of the most
impotant
of great significance or value
important
impatient
service
Suggestion
services
that
proded
on condition, with the understanding, if; usually followed by that
provided
prodded
by mobile
divices
an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'
devices
.
Accept space
.
In
conclution
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conciliation
consolation
, Mobile
divice
an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'
devices
device
are extremley
Suggestion
are extremely used
are extremely use
use
full
a substance that can be consumed to produce energy
fuel
for young
genaration
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generation
generations
if it is
use
proper way.
Awayearnes
Suggestion
Awareness
of teachers and
perents
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
are important for
awoid
distaction
mental turmoil
distraction
for education.

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