Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.

Nowadays there are immense ways to fill our minds with lots of information
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like internet, televisions
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books
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news papers
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
and the list is endless. I agree with
statement
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the statement
that in order to be well informed
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a person must grab information from various new resources because of the following reasons that
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I
will explain in the following passage.
First
of all,
i
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I
think that we cannot depend upon one type of source to enhance our
knowledge
. As we are living in the advanced era
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where it is vital to update ourselves with different types of
informations
a message received and understood
information
. It is necessary to be competent and be confident. When we use different resources to enhance our
knowledge
we feel much determined
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No one can challenge our
knowledge
when we have full credence on ourselves.
For
instance my
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instance, my
personal example is a compelling example of
this
.
Last
year
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
had to give a presentation on my science project and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
prepared
my self
reflexive form of "me"
myself
by gathering
knowledge
from my teachers, internet, library books and journals
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So many students and teachers raised questions and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
explained the answers to all of them. And
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
felt proud of
my self
reflexive form of "me"
myself
.
Secondly
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think that when we investigate various resources to grab much of the information
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it helps to develop a unique personality that make us different from others
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Our efforts can be seen in our work
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that leads us towards
heights
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the heights
of success. We are admired and recognised by others like our teachers, colleagues or family members.
For instance
, my brother is
haituated
take or consume (regularly or habitually)
habituated
to explore different materials to study for his exams
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He
does not binds
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does not bind
has not bound
himself to books only. He discusses with teachers and take help from
seniours
older; higher in rank; longer in length of tenure or service
seniors
senior
scenarios
and make notes
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This
is the reason he
always get
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always gets
is always getting
highest grades
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the highest grades
in his class and
last
year he got the award
of
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for
best student of the year
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In
conclusion i
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conclusion, I
conclusion I
am of the opinion that a person should utilize different materials to be well informed to be competent and to develop a great personality.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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