International sporting events promote peace between countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Presently, international
sport
games are
started
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starting
to be a symbol of peace between countries.
Although
,
the better
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the good
fight
in the ring
than
the quality of a person's voice
tone
in
fight
with each other in real
war
, I,
however
, believe it has had a negative impact when spend a large amount money to these games, if my opinion
sport
games competitions better than
real
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a real war
real wars
war
.
First
and foremost, organizing the Olympic games or other world championship games every often help countries show their power and ability in these games. While I concede that some people manipulate with these games to increase hates between countries and usually fans of these countries
fight
with each other, the problem is that still acceptable the 21st century as most of counties have the nuclear bomb. One
this
bomb can kill millions of people, so ring is the best place when
fight
super countries with each other.
For example
: The United
stated
the federal department in the United States that sets and maintains foreign policies
States
and
Soviet Union
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the Soviet Union
fought with each other in every
sport
event to show their power than starting
nuclear
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a nuclear war
war
.
Secondly
, another factor is better spending these monies on organizing games than buying real rockets, tanks.
However
, I argued that sportsmen could injure in these
sport
competitions and spend a large amount of money organization these games. In fact, during the Olympic games has a great tradition stop
war
with each other, and
also
presidents of enemy counties have
chance talk
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a chance talk
with
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to
each other in the opening and closing ceremony.
This
communication could prevent any conflicts in the future and speak actual problem between countries.
Moreover
, these competitions have a large amount of income
to
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in
budget games owner country
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the budget game owner country
budget game owner country
. So, not only can spend these monies to improve social status of citizens, but it
also
opens a lot of work places and increase quality medication service. In conclusion, not only do international games give chance of president of
counites speak
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countries, speak
countries speak
committees speak
with each other to solve their problem, but it
also
is
better
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a better fight
fight
in the ring than people deft in the real
war
.
Therefore
, I agree that
sport
events promote
Accept comma addition
events, promote
peace between countries.
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