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International sporting events promote peace between countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Presently, international
sport
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 games are
started
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starting
 to be a symbol of peace between countries.
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,
the better
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the good
fight
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 in the ring
than
the quality of a person's voice
tone
 in
fight
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 with each other in real
war
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, I,
however
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, believe it has had a negative impact when spend a large amount money to these games, if my opinion
sport
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 games competitions better than
real
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a real war
real wars
war
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.
First
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 and foremost, organizing the Olympic games or other world championship games every often help countries show their power and ability in these games. While I concede that some people manipulate with these games to increase hates between countries and usually fans of these countries
fight
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 with each other, the problem is that still acceptable the 21st century as most of counties have the nuclear bomb. One
this
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 bomb can kill millions of people, so ring is the best place when
fight
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 super countries with each other.
For example
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: The United
stated
the federal department in the United States that sets and maintains foreign policies
States
 and
Soviet Union
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the Soviet Union
 fought with each other in every
sport
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 event to show their power than starting
nuclear
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a nuclear war
war
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.
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, another factor is better spending these monies on organizing games than buying real rockets, tanks.
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, I argued that sportsmen could injure in these
sport
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 competitions and spend a large amount of money organization these games. In fact, during the Olympic games has a great tradition stop
war
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 with each other, and
also
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 presidents of enemy counties have
chance talk
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a chance talk
with
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to
 each other in the opening and closing ceremony.
This
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 communication could prevent any conflicts in the future and speak actual problem between countries.
Moreover
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, these competitions have a large amount of income
to
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in
budget games owner country
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the budget game owner country
budget game owner country
. So, not only can spend these monies to improve social status of citizens, but it
also
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 opens a lot of work places and increase quality medication service. In conclusion, not only do international games give chance of president of
counites speak
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countries, speak
countries speak
committees speak
 with each other to solve their problem, but it
also
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 is
better
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a better fight
fight
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 in the ring than people deft in the real
war
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.
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, I agree that
sport
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events promote
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events, promote
 peace between countries.
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