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Some people think that once a person becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. Do you agree with this statement.

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Nowadays, some people argue that criminals will commit
crime
 in the future and always be offenders. I totally agree with
this
 statement. In
this
 essay, I shall put
my
objective form of "I"
me
 forth to support my opinion. The main reason is that criminal usually re-offended after being released.
First
, since they had
criminal record
Suggestion
a criminal record
, finding jobs will become difficult.
This
 means that they tend to break the law to make a living even with a petty
crime
, leading to become a convicts again. Take Ho Chi Minh, where famous as the biggest city in Viet Nam is an example. In 2018, the number of people who engaged in unlawful activities in the
second
 time increased by 2% compared with the year before. Another reason is the mixture of dangerous offenders. By living together in prisons, wrongdoer easy to make
crime
gangbangs
Suggestion
gang bangs
. In fact, there are a different
kinds
Suggestion
kind
 of dangerous convicts like pillagers, rapists, killers, vv who were bad- nurtured, they will easily commit
crime
 together after finish rehabilitation programs.
For instance
,
last
 year, Dong Nai had the biggest prison escape in the history. 400 criminals break out of jail to
robbed
Suggestion
rob
 money from people on the street. In conclusion, it is true when people think
criminal
Suggestion
the criminal
criminals
 will be always criminal. I strongly recommend that
government
Suggestion
the government
 should take advantage for criminal after released.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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