In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Across the globe, many individuals own guns for self-defence and recreational purposes. Gun related mortalities in families –

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essay, I shall appeal to crime statistics to argue that a person is at a far greater risk being shot if there is a cannon in a home.

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, it is intuitively obvious that having a pistol in a family endangers children and teenagers.

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is because minors do not have the requisite knowledge or maturity to handle weapons safely.

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, the US Department of Justice recently revealed statistics showing that 150 American children and teenagers die each year because of accidents relating to tribe rifles.

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, it is incontrovertible that household shotguns lead to additional shootings.

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, family

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, often results in deadly aggression.

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, The International Crime Bureau recently produced statistical evidence that – if there is a household

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a pistol with a revolving cylinder (usually having six chambers for bullets)

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– a man is twice as likely (if he discovers his wife having an affair) to kill her in a fit of jealous rage.

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, once again, tribe rifles correlate positively with additional shootings. In conclusion, there is undeniable evidence that having a flintlock in a house leads to

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shootings. Given the strength of

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evidence, in the future, more legislature needs to be put in place to limit private magnum ownership.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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The floor plan shows changes made to a home during a 6-month period.

Some people think that modern tecchnology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed rather than work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?