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Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples.

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Nowadays,
money
 become a prime recipe for
happiness
,
however
, there any many opinions towards that correlation of
money
 and
happiness
. One group of people embark upon the necessity of
money
 to have
happiness
, whereas, other group thinks that
money
 has no relation with
happiness
. I
’m completely disagree
Suggestion
completely disagree
completely disagreed
 with the ideology of being happy with
money
.
This
 essay will discuss about relationship of
money
 and
happiness
.
To begin
 with, with
money
 a
person
 can buy things which are required to be happy. A
person
 can be happy by having a good car, big house and a company, all of
this
can only be attain
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can only be attained
 by having
money
. People’s perception towards poor
person
 and
rich
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a rich person
person
 is different rather than giving importance to a
person
, people gave importance to
money
. To cite an example, Jeff
Beros
the quantity that a barrow will hold
Barrows
, always remain happy as the richest man on earth, and he
have
Suggestion
has
 all the things which make his family happy.
On the other hand
,
money
 is not the sole criteria of being happy and sometimes, it is not
event
the latter part of the day (the period of decreasing daylight from late afternoon until nightfall)
even
 required for
happiness
. Perception is the ingredient which decides, whether
money
 is required for
happiness
 or not, and it varies from
person
 to
person
.
Happiness
 can be attained by
money
, but that can’t be maintained for
long time
Suggestion
a long time
 as
money
 is not a static object, one can lose or make it more. Whereas, feelings they are forever and become the sole purpose of
happiness
, which lasts longer. To illustrate the fact, people of “Bhutan” don’t have much
money
 but still
happiness
 prevails there. To recapitulate,
money
 is necessary to buy
things but
Accept comma addition
things, but
 I disagree that,
money
 is the only thing which makes people happy in their lives.
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