There is increase of noise in our daily lives nowadays. Why is this a problem? What can be done to reduce it?

Noise levels are gradually on the increase due developments in countries. Villages becoming towns and towns becoming cities, thereby, increasing the volume of
sound
related activities in the environment. Entertainment, religious activities, industrial activities and
construction
works are few of the daily increased volume which we encounter. By having an increased
activities
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activity
in the noise
level
, our concentration levels
begins
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begin
to drop.
For example
, schools located in
construction
areas can be affected. Students who are learning won't be able to concentrate on what they are being taught, rather they will be distracted by the volume of
sound
coming from different angles on the
construction
site.
Also
, in places of work close to major roads, sometimes the distractions of the activities from the main road can be a source of concern to people working in
such
an environment. The constant movement of cars, horns and sounds from car exhaust can reduce their
level
of concentration. Another issue with increased
sound
has to do with Industries close to the city. The
level
of pollution generated by the machines used in these industries
are
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is
at the
level
which humans can't cope with, as sometimes it has health implications for humans, most times in the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
part of the human life if not now. Government regulation can be used to reduce the problem in terms of ensuring
construction
companies are located in areas designated for
such
and regulating the
level
of
sound
originating from the location. Ensuring that
buidings
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
buildings
which are built for specific purposes are not turned around after
sometime
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some time
. By ensuring housing authorities in charge of supervising
construction
works should ensure that machinery and equipment used in sites adhere to minimal
sound
levels. With
minimal
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a minimal sound level
sound
level
, we all as human can live
an
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a
healthy life in a peaceful, calm and serene environment.
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