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Some people think that books should be stopped in school and that videos, films and computers should be used instead. To what extent do you agree?

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With the advancement of technology, certain nations think that books should be replaced by digital devices in
school
 and all lessons will be taught by that device. In my opinion, that digital tools should be combined with
school
 programs, but not replaced dramatically.
Moreover
,
school
 teachers can make a plan and
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 them as day of watching TV and
ect
take in solid food
eat
. It is clearly evident, that children are smarter than elder man, a distinction between elder generation and the young generation is
fast learn
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fast, learn
,
hence
 teaching method by TV, computer can give a bit advantage. Some lessons require video
such
 as history where too much detail. Many historical facts can be captured by documentary film and can be presented to
school
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 for easy
percieve
.
Moreover
, certain countries have found video lessons are more beneficial and have included
to
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in
with
into
on
school program
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the school program
.
Their
Suggestion
There
 have enrolled digital tools as device which support for explanation whole theme.
However
, TV, computer will never replace a
book
. Because with
book
 everyone can build own view regarding
book
 impression, while in a video shows
producer
Suggestion
producer's
 imagination which does not always match. During the reading a
book
 people can generate impressive from
book
 without external influence and keep them in mind.
Book
 can form us as individual, we can take into account that advice what we prefer. In conclusion, the old
school
 teaching program should develop with digital tools together.
Furthermore
, a combination of two sectors can be reached a good result in the education sector.
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