You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have been invited to attend an interview for a place on a course of study at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot go to the interview at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter •explain why you cannot keep the appointment •apologise and offer to arrange a new appointment •ask how long the interview will be, and whether there will be any tests during it You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you of my inability to attend the

interview

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scheduled on 25 Sep 2024. I have applied to study the public management course which is scheduled to commence in October 2024 and have planned to face the

interview

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on the above-mentioned date.

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, I am unable to participate in it

due to

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the already booked medical appointment with my family doctor who is not available on an alternative day. I express my sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused by

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and

will

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be grateful to you if you could inform me of a different date if available to face the

interview

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apply

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because the program I selected

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crucial for me to grow my career.

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, please inform me duration and any exam process included in the

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, I can prepare well for it to achieve my goal. I look forward to

hear

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from you. Yours faithfully Aravinda

aravindasajithWed Sep 25 2024

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task achievement

Provide more details about why the medical appointment could not be rescheduled. This will show a more complete response to the task.

coherence cohesion

Consider using a variety of sentence structures to enhance the coherence of your letter.

suitable writing tone

Polite and respectful tone throughout the letter.

greeting and closing

Clear closing and greeting which are well-structured.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

154 words

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