In developing countries, some people believe that governments should give people access to new technology in order to improve their lives, while others think governments should offer free education. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.
Governments, either developed or developing countries, are responsible for improving lives of their people,
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the utmost priority
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new technologies can save time; Suggestion
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paper work
and trips to tax office. work that involves handling papers: forms or letters or reports etc.
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advance technological metropolitan travel system with Suggestion
The
advance payment method
can avoid the long queue and save time for more productive activities. The Suggestion
an advance payment method
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can sell his product to rest of the world through online sales.
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education
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education, then
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more people will be able to get new knowledge about new things, Linking Words
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, more student can select the computer, information and software degree, which result in development and right use of the technologies. Linking Words
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education
will provide the opportunities to excel in other areas of science and life that will result in balance economy with rich culture and recreation heritage.
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growing economy
and developing the nation.Suggestion
a growing economy
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