The quality of computer language translation has improved significantly in recent years. Therefore, it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
past few years
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the past few years
, the computerized
translation
has entered
new area
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a new area
new areas
of accuracy due to advanced information Technology. Some people believe That now there is no need for children to learn a foreign
language
. I agree That high accuracy of computerized
translation
helpfull but
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helpful, but
helpful but
I strongly believe That kinds should
learm
gain knowledge or skills
learn
atleast
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at least
on
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
foreign
language
. There are hundreds of languages in the world and it is not possible for everyone to master in them; accurate computer based
translation
can be very
halpfull
providing assistance or serving a useful function
helpful
hopeful
tool in
this
situation. Learning a new
language
other than your mother tongue is good for interpersonal skills and
intellactual
of or associated with or requiring the use of the mind
intellectual
development. For instant, a study concluded That learning a foreign
languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
improves the mental development of children.
Further
, it will help to improve the
comunication
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
skill of
learner
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the learner
learners
. Computer
translation
can
also
be used as a supporting tool to learn new
language
and enrich knowledge of previously learned
language
. Each
language
has its own
culture heritage
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culture, heritage
,
therefore
learning a foreign
language
is not only a way of
communiation but
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communication, but
communication but
also
a path of learning the other
culture
.
For example
,
Spanish
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the Spanish language
language
has strong
spanish
the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
culture
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cultural
heritage and kids learning
spanish
the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
will
also
introduce
to
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into
spanish
the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
culture
and learn new things about its roots. In conclusion, computer base
translation
can be a supporting
toll
an implement used in the practice of a vocation
tool
for many to translate from one
language
to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
;
however learning
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however, learning
foreign
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a foreign language
language
is
helpfull
providing assistance or serving a useful function
helpful
for children to improve their
intellactual
of or associated with or requiring the use of the mind
intellectual
,
comunication
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
and interpersonal Skills.
Therfore
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Therefore
, children should
atleast
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at least
learn one foreign
language
.
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