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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Certain Persons
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
belief
 that youth
time
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 is the best in the
everyones
all people
everyone
 lives
,
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,
 but same
time
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 additional people thought is adult journey is brought more joyful because of more responsibilities. I will argue that teenage
life
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 is the most happiest due to several reasons.
Firstly
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, nowadays due to globalization younger
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 have
lot
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lots
 of
time
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 to explore many things in their age compare to others because they have a free
time
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 for travel, studies and enjoy with friends, on top of that teenage is
happiest
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the happiest life
life
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 because of no
responsibility
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 and no one depend on them
hence
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 their
life
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 is
blessful
completely happy and contented
blissful
blissfully
 to enjoy.
For Example
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,
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,
 As per latest CNN survey
in
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with
of
 worldwide young people are spending more money
in
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on
 travel and all of the
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
 are
univeristy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
 kids. On the
otherhand
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other hand
, Mainly, adults have more
responsibility
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 compare with
childerns
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 because they are busy with work and personal schedules
therefore
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 they don't have
to
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time to enjoy the
the time to enjoy
time
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 enjoy the
life
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.
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.
In addition
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 that
,
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,
 they have to think about their
childerns
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 future
endovers
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavours
end overs
, so that
time
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 will pass. In
Next
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, some adults look
thir
appropriate to; intended for
for
 enjoyment in family
responsibility
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 like
kids
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kids'
 studies and their future
.
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.
For Instance
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,
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,
 For some of the developing countries like India and Brazil most of the elders think
for
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about
 their kids future in spite of them,
what ever
one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
 they are earning in their salary
,
Accept space
,
 keep some amount
to
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of
 kids. In conclusion, some people thought that college students are enjoying their
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
 rather than adults because they don't have any
responsibility
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, but married persons
also
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 enjoy with their
life
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 in
different way
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different ways
a different way
 like kids
responsibility
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 and other things. I have argued that youth will more enjoy better than to seniors because they have got very free
time
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 to explore new thing in worldwide and most of the
time
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 they can spend with
they
of them or themselves
their
 loved
onces
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
ones
.
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