Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Certain Persons
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
belief
that youth
time
is the best in the
everyones
all people
everyone
lives
,
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,
but same
time
additional people thought is adult journey is brought more joyful because of more responsibilities. I will argue that teenage
life
is the most happiest due to several reasons.
Firstly
, nowadays due to globalization younger
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
have
lot
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lots
of
time
to explore many things in their age compare to others because they have a free
time
for travel, studies and enjoy with friends, on top of that teenage is
happiest
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the happiest life
life
because of no
responsibility
and no one depend on them
hence
their
life
is
blessful
completely happy and contented
blissful
blissfully
to enjoy.
For Example
,
Accept space
,
As per latest CNN survey
in
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with
of
worldwide young people are spending more money
in
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on
travel and all of the
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
are
univeristy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
kids. On the
otherhand
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other hand
, Mainly, adults have more
responsibility
compare with
childerns
because they are busy with work and personal schedules
therefore
they don't have
to
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time to enjoy the
the time to enjoy
time
enjoy the
life
.
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.
In addition
that
,
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,
they have to think about their
childerns
future
endovers
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavours
end overs
, so that
time
will pass. In
Next
, some adults look
thir
appropriate to; intended for
for
enjoyment in family
responsibility
like
kids
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kids'
studies and their future
.
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.
For Instance
,
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,
For some of the developing countries like India and Brazil most of the elders think
for
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about
their kids future in spite of them,
what ever
one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
they are earning in their salary
,
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,
keep some amount
to
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of
kids. In conclusion, some people thought that college students are enjoying their
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
rather than adults because they don't have any
responsibility
, but married persons
also
enjoy with their
life
in
different way
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different ways
a different way
like kids
responsibility
and other things. I have argued that youth will more enjoy better than to seniors because they have got very free
time
to explore new thing in worldwide and most of the
time
they can spend with
they
of them or themselves
their
loved
onces
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
ones
.
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