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MANY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IN ORDER TO HAVE CLEAN AND TIDY STREETS IN THEIR NEIGHBOURHOODS, THIS SHOULD BE RESIDENT'S RESPONSIBILITY, WHILE OTHERS THINK IT SHOULD BE GOVERNMENT'S DUTY. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

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An immaculate street is a healthy sign of a developing locality, and it
also
 has far-flung effects on a nation's aesthetics.
However
, the body responsible to keep the lanes of an area is a contentious issue. Some say local natives should look after the cleanliness of their
sorrounding
closely encircling
surrounding
 area, others believe that the governing body should take charge of the same.
This
 essay will argue why, I think, it is essential for the latter to be the controlling figure. To embark on, the government has the authority to implement a law restricting
garbage
 disposal on the streets. A myriad of people lacks the enthusiasm to initiate the tidiness of their
near-by
close at hand
nearby
Nairobi
 area and
instead
 of cleaning a pre-existing litter, many dispose their rubbish as well on the same spot making the condition even worse.
Hence
, the state can create a potential ripple
that is
 constructive as well as encouraging by implementing few laws restricting
garbage
 disposal on roads. To illustrate, the UK government has a heavy penalty for disturbing the pristine conditions of the streets, and in order to avoid
such
 fines, people help maintain these roads.
Furthermore
, it is the state's job to provide the basic facilities and utilities in order to have unspoiled roads,
such
 as, public toilets and dustbins.
Although
 these might seem as small necessities, they play a pivotal role in maintaining the locality's spotless condition.
For instance
, installing
garbage
 bins at every few yards at a walkway, reduce a native's urge to throw rubbish on
street
Suggestion
the street
streets
 as he/she spots a bin at a near distance. To reiterate, I believe that it is the state's responsibility to keep the city
spike
completely neat and clean
spick
 and span.
This
 can be achieved by taking two simple measures involving implementing a no-litter on streets law and provision of
garbage
 collecting containers and public restrooms.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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