The government should spent more money on railways than on roads. What do you think about this?

Different transportations are a main part of our life. There is not denying that railways and roads need more authority investments for their maintenance. I personally believe that railways are the most efficient way of transport for the any
country
weather roads. Let me examine both views before final conclusion. It is true that roads are more exposed in some countries than railways which leading us to the opinion that regime should support highways and all streets with a higher percentage of investment than railways itself. As an example, Croatia is pushing a huge amount of the yearly budget on the highways, whether they are occupied just a few months during the whole year.
Instead
of that, I believe that should be been redirecting more money to the trains and train lines modernisation,
instead
. Lets us take a look at the
country
where railway's benefits are more recognised by government, rather the roads. Very good example for
this
case is Swicheland. A relatively small
country
with natural huge mountains as obstacles what increase cost
for
Suggestion
to
build and
maintane
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
maintained
railways, increasing yearly budget for modernisation.
This
country
have
Suggestion
has
in the low that no any truck can drive around,
instead
if they want pass trough
coutry
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
, they need to be loaded on the trains. To
conclud
decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion
conclude
, any government should examine beneficial values of
the both transport
Suggestion
both the transport
paths, rather picking up just one as
best option
Suggestion
the best option
. With respect to the roads I will prefer that
politics supportig
Accept comma addition
politics, supporting
politics supporting
and investing more in the
eviramentally
cleaner
trasports
move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
,
what
Suggestion
what's
between
this
plural of "this"
these
two railways are
in
Suggestion
on
my radar.
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