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There is an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbor. What causes this situation? How to solve it? Give your own idea.

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There is no doubt that people busy with their profession in many cities. The majority of the people do not know their neighbours. In
this
 essay, I will explain the causes of
this
 situation and solution for
this
. Nowadays, most of the people came from villages for their studies or professions. Everyone busy with their profession and they do not have much
time
 to spend with their family. Totally they concentrated on earning money and assets. Who are coming from villages for their profession most of the
time
 spend with their work as well as family. Some people do not spend more
time
 with their family
also
 due to lack of
time
.
For example
, These days people cannot believe others not much easily and survive independently. Even they cannot think somebody will help you whenever you have a problem. They are trying to solve their issues without anybody help. In
this
 case, people cannot require to know about their neighbours. To solve these kind of situations, people should believe others
first
 because nowadays most of the people selfish. So people try to make friends in offices and
also
 where they are living. If any emergency, friends will always help you in any kind of situation. If you know the neighbours,
then
 they will help you any bad or good situations. At the conclusion, most of the people increasing do not know their neighbours, due to they cannot trust to other people, to solve
this
 need to make friend where they are living and working.
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