The only way to ensure road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offences? To what extent do you agree?
It cannot be denied that
road
accidents invariably result from law violations, be it over-speeding or drunk driving just to mention a few. Hence
, great stress should be laid on the enactment of tighter punishments in terms of non-custodial to corporal remedy, ranging from heavy fines, license suspension to imprisonments. This
would act as a deterrent to prevent road
participants, out of fear for
legal consequences, from committing Suggestion
of
traffic
offense
.
Having said that, there are other remedies which the government can take into account in order to fully address a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offences
traffic
problems. Firstly
, no matter how strict the penalties are, it is not uncommon to see offenders who persistently break traffic
rules, like jumping the red lights, especially when there is no supervision from the law enforcers. In such
cases, stringent regulations might be helpless, thus
only when realizing the extreme gravity of irresponsible driving can these neglectful drivers would voluntarily turn into law-abiding road
users. That is
to say, the government should raise public awareness by carrying out traffic
safety campaigns. A case in point is the success in affecting drivers’ bad behaviors
of the Vietnamese government’ campaign in 2010, which publicized the horrendous images of manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
traffic
victims suffering from life-long
damage and continuing through life
lifelong
disformation
. a change for the worse
deformation
In addition
, human’s wrongdoings are not entirely at fault in certain circumstances, but rather the low-quality condition of road
design. It is therefore
crucial for road
engineers to focus on black spot regions in order to understand what factor causes the accidents and take suitable action to renovate and maintain the infrastructure there as well as plan better future designs.
To summarize, implementation of strict punitive remedy
cannot single-handedly resolve every facet of the Suggestion
the strict punitive remedy
a strict punitive remedy
strict punitive remedies
traffic
many problems. It is my belief that a synthesis of measures should be take
in order to ensure the well-being of Suggestion
should take
should be taken
road
participants.Submitted by hainhu2709 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
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