The only way to ensure road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offences? To what extent do you agree?

It cannot be denied that

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accidents invariably result from law violations, be it over-speeding or drunk driving just to mention a few.

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, great stress should be laid on the enactment of tighter punishments in terms of non-custodial to corporal remedy, ranging from heavy fines, license suspension to imprisonments.

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would act as a deterrent to prevent

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participants, out of fear

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legal consequences, from committing

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offense

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offences

. Having said that, there are other remedies which the government can take into account in order to fully address

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problems.

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, no matter how strict the penalties are, it is not uncommon to see offenders who persistently break

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rules, like jumping the red lights, especially when there is no supervision from the law enforcers. In

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cases, stringent regulations might be helpless,

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only when realizing the extreme gravity of irresponsible driving can these neglectful drivers would voluntarily turn into law-abiding

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users.

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to say, the government should raise public awareness by carrying out

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safety campaigns. A case in point is the success in affecting drivers’ bad

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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of the Vietnamese government’ campaign in 2010, which publicized the horrendous images of

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victims suffering from

life-long

continuing through life

lifelong

damage and

disformation

a change for the worse

deformation

.

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, human’s wrongdoings are not entirely at fault in certain circumstances, but rather the low-quality condition of

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design. It is

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crucial for

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engineers to focus on black spot regions in order to understand what factor causes the accidents and take suitable action to renovate and maintain the infrastructure there as well as plan better future designs. To summarize, implementation of

strict punitive remedy

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the strict punitive remedy

a strict punitive remedy

strict punitive remedies

cannot single-handedly resolve every facet of the

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many problems. It is my belief that a synthesis of measures

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should take

should be taken

in order to ensure the well-being of

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participants.