In recent years some countries have experienced vary rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the country sides. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are the problems? How might they be reduced?

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the government would tend to invest funds for infrastructure than on the remote side. Other challenges that the city dwellers suffer from

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the high cost of living, congestion, poor

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quality and traffic problems.

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density and soaring usage of private vehicles, that which we can see in cities like London; holds a reputation of the highest cost of living and

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serious impact to the nation is the metros contribute sheer volume of waste production percentage. Illegal dumping of these discarded items

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landfills and water resources would deteriorate the quality of land, water and

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on urban regions. Eventually, it becomes detrimental to human health and causing extinction or dwindling in numbers of species inhabited on those polluted places. Turning to possible solutions, governments can

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deal with the burning

issue of inexorable waste accumulation in city centres through implementing effective rubbish collecting and

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expend, as from a fund

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, to curb the

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pollution they can impose

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a carbon tax

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restrict private cars on road on alternate days.

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, it would mitigate carbon emissions and traffic jams.

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, local authorities can control the new investments is businesses and can deviate them to suburban areas nearby, in order to curtail the migration and

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

discrepancies
mass migration
congestion
urban sprawl
population decline
cultural heritage
food security
social stratification
economic diversification
sustainable development
public services
rural revitalization
cultural preservation
labor shortages
incentives
rural-urban continuum
quality of life
infrastructure development

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Fully explain your ideas

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