Tourism is not beneficial by many ? Write both view and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that

tourism industry

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the tourism industry

has been developing for the

last

two centuries;

however

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However

, while some opponents

this

advancement argue that

this

could bring many negative

imapct

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impacts

impact

to the host country, others consider

this

industry a land of opportunities. In my opinion, I firmly support the latter's viewpoint since it denotes regarding more benefits. On the one hand, those who are

support

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supported

to flourish

holyday

leisure time away from work devoted to rest or pleasure

holiday

holidays

making business

pointout

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point out

that

this

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This

would enable to provide countless

employement

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

opportunities to

people

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the people

of that local

communitty

a group of people living in a particular local area

community

communities

, and I support

this

statement.

In other words

,

this

uplifts standard of living since they have enough money to meet their

requirement

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requirements

. Take Srilankaas an example, which was

exteamely

to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect

extremely

devasted

take away possessions from someone

divested

devoted

by its internal issues like violence and poverty;

however

; once they started to showcasing their

prestine

completely free from dirt or contamination

pristine

beaches and

geen

of the color between blue and yellow in the color spectrum; similar to the color of fresh grass

green

giant

gene

lands towards foreigners, which improves

financial status

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the financial status

of that country incredibly. Despite the above mentioned argument

,

Accept space

,

several people oppose

this

advancemententirely

.

This

is because opponents

says

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say

that when a large number of

tourist

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tourists

visit any place, which is

primarely

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Primarily

Primarely

do not intend to build to accommodate

such

a vast herd of people may damage the area

substancialy

to a great extent or degree

substantially

. Apart from

this

, since observing visitors life style for

along

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a long

time by younger generation would blindly obey that culture

instead

of own culture and heritage background

;

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;

eventually,

this

may vanish local tradition and language

for ever

for a limitless time

forever

. By way of conclusion,

eventhough

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even though

people differ in their

opinio n

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

consider

development

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the development

of

travelling

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Travelling

industry not only increase national

income but

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income, but

standard of life

also

.

It

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Than

is pr

edicted tha

a person or thing having the same function or characteristics as another

counterparts

t in coming years the countries which invest on

this

field would have a brighter future than its couterparts