Some people believe that the government should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire. Others say individuals should save during their working years to fund their own retirement. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

The ageing population has led to increasing concerns about pensions and their future sustainability. There are conflicting views on whether the government or the private sector should be responsible for old people during their

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private

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is becoming popular, my view is that it is the government’s responsibility to provide financial stability to its senior citizens in

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To begin

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with

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pension

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programs will help alleviate poverty for older citizens after

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.

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, in Mexico, studies showed that 55% of its workforce benefited from

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programs and while those in non-contributory programs alleviated poverty by 20%. These programs are usually tied to employment, so that workers will receive financial and health care benefits when they get old and stop working. In some countries, the

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plans

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include non-contributory programs which benefit those workers whose employers were not compliant with superannuation systems as well as for those individuals that never worked by reason of disability, incapacity or possibly no proper education.

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superannuation schemes provide social security for older people in the later years.

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schemes (often mandatory) encourage long term savings. There is

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recognition that adults during their workforce years do not provide for their senior years because of current consumption over savings and insufficient saving for

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when the person is younger. With government

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programs, there is a redistribution of income within a person's lifetime to enable accumulation of wealth.

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is illustrated when a 20year old may not even consider

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contributions upon entering the workforce and focus more on household expenditure or mortgage repayments. In conclusion, government funded pensions benefit older citizens through poverty alleviation and social security which I think should only be institutionalised through the

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and not burdened on individuals in the private sector.