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Some people think that it is important to teach children the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

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In today's modern society, many parents and teachers will believe that
child
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a child
the child
children
 should possess excellent writing skills in order to be successful.
On the other hand
, few individuals argue that better handwriting is not significant and do not play a vital role in their infants career.In my opinion, I completely agree with the fact that handwriting skills can be acquired in very early age or else it would be difficult to adapt in
future
Suggestion
the future
.
Firstly
, many adults believe that poor handwriting skills or illegible writing can have detrimental effects on their academic performance.
Furthermore
, good writing ability would be helpful in their professional life and can act an important skill in
this
 competitive world.
For instance
, there are several tests like IELTS, PTE in which student would not get good marks if their writing is not
legimate
of marriages and offspring; recognized as lawful
legitimate
 to
examiner
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the examiner
,
although
 they would have brilliant ideas to share but that could be of no use because of poor handwriting.
On the other hand
, a lot of people argue that in today's
digitalizing
put into digital form, as for use in a computer
digitalising
world there
Accept comma addition
world, there
 is no need to waste time in improving handwriting skills of your children
as
Suggestion
at
this
 time can be utilized in learning other techniques.
In addition
, all the technological devices like computer, laptop and iPads had
auto correct feature
Suggestion
an auto correct feature
 which can be used by toddlers while doing their homework and assignments. In conclusion, children should acquire better handwriting skill in order to get success in their academic and professional life. In order to build
this
 up, it should be better taught
at
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in
 their early days as it could act as a skill which would provide competitiveness later in their future.

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