In the past, important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum. Nowadays information is freely available on internet, therefore is no longer need for museum. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Museums store the traditions and history of our ancestors. As a lot of
information
regarding
this
is already available online, some people believe that museums should not exist anymore.
However
, I entirely disagree with
this
notion because museums allow
one
to watch in person the belongings of famous people from the past and enable us to learn more about their lives.
To begin
with, museums open the doors
to
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in
the past because they contain in them the essential and special things of our ancestors. By visiting
one
,
one
can actually see the things used by them and store them in their mind. The items seen in person have
huge impact
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a huge impact
on
one
than the ones seen in
images
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the images
.
Therefore
, they can motivate
one
to learn more about their ancestors.
For instance
, National Museum of Lahore has in it the belongings of Mughal Emperors. So,
one
can vividly imagine how our elders spent their lives, what were their interests and much more.
Although
the online media has all the
information
of
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about
the past and our culture,
one
can only see the images without touching them actually. When
one
touches them it gives special feelings regarding their users and makes
one
emotional which is highly unlikely by just viewing the images, and it creates a special and a stronger bond of
one
with their elders who are not physically with them anymore.
More over
in addition
Moreover
, as
their
in or at that place
there
is plenty of
information
available on the internet,
one
struggles with identifying the real
information
because false
information
is
also
there.
Hence
, visiting the museum can never be replaced by just reading about it online. To conclude, even though
internet
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the internet
is an easily available and free way of getting
information
about
one
's past and culture, it cannot replace the sentiments attached
with
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to
visiting the museums in person and it cannot allow
one
to
phsyically
in accord with physical laws
physically
handle things.
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