Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

In my opinion,
yes women’s
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yes, women’s
should be given
equal chance
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an equal chance
.
in
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In
today’s fast developing
world there
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world, there
is no difference between women and man. Both share
same stage
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the same stage
and have equal rights to choose their leaving. Our fundamental rights are same for both.
we
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We
should not limit women to household works. They have very good talent and have ability to
work
in multi task manner, managing the house and
work
together.
the
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The
belief that a girl should only learn
house
the work of cleaning and running a house
housework
work
and take care are old they were true in ancient time when humans use to
work
only in farms.
that
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That
time the
work
was divided between the two partners one will
work
out in the farm and other will take care
for
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of
other thing required for
there
of them or themselves
their
daily leavings. But today humans have become more modern and more
cevilized
having a high state of culture and development both social and technological
civilized
civilised
.
in
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In
todays fast pace lifestyle you cannot depend only one person earning, both have to share
there
of them or themselves
their
responsibility.
there
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There
are many
womans
an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
woman
who have reached to the top most position in
there
of them or themselves
their
career, they have marked
there
of them or themselves
their
presence in all fields
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of
corporate
,
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,
defiance
,
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,
science and research.
women’s
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Women’s
also
have a strong presence in politics.
in
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In
some countries world are lead by women’s
in
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In
my
opinion we
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opinion, we
should not
limited
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limit
or cut the wings of women by not allowing them to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
there
of them or themselves
their
career dreams.

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