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Some scientists think that are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Extraterrestrials, that may range from single-celled organisms to beings with a
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 far more advanced than humanity may exist on other planets of the universe. Scientists do not have any evidence to prove their existence to date. According to one camp of scientists, messages should be sent to those aliens to confirm their existence;
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, the other camp expresses concerns about hailing the attention of alien civilizations. I would delve into both the views in
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 essay. Due of over exploitation, the earth is slowly becoming uninhabitable,
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 with. In the true spirit of exploration, astrologists want to explore the space for the existence of advanced
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 forms which would be beneficial for us in the future. Cosmologists like Stephen hawking consider
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 of intelligent lives may get to a period in our future where we outgrow our evolutionary baggage.
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, a
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 of extraterrestrial civilizations will make us not only technologically more proficient than we are, but more aware of the rarity and preciousness of
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 in the cosmos.
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, there is a plethora of risks in contacting extraterrestrial scientists currently have no idea what alien
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-forms might look like, or how they might respond to contact from human
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 advanced aliens would perhaps become nomads, looking to conquer and colonize whatever planets they could reach. We don't know much about aliens, but we know about humans. If we look at history, contact between humans and less intelligent organisms have often been violent and have gone badly for the less advanced. A
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 reading one of our messages could be billions of years ahead of us. If so, they will be vastly more powerful, and may not see us as any more valuable than we see bacteria. In conclusion, even though I fear that an advanced alien
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 would have no problem wiping out the human race, the desire for the
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 for
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 beyond earth outgrows the risks and I strongly agree that it would give us a commitment to live. We are alive. We are intelligent. We must
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 for the signs of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraterrestrial
  • investigate
  • interstellar
  • speculate
  • communication
  • primitive
  • potential
  • collaboration
  • unlock
  • unprecedented
  • advancement
  • caution
  • consequences
  • hostile
  • unknowingly
  • civilization
  • disrupt
  • evolution
  • preserve
  • ponder
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