You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have hand to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library. In you letter, you should: Formal letter explaining the situation - my gramother suffering from cancer apologize for the inconvenience called - apologising and say what you are going to do - My friend will deliver to tou next day

Dear Madam, I am writing
this
letter to apologise for not returning your
books
on time
due to
the
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family emergency. I borrowed three literature
books
from your library
last
week, I
supposed
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to return them today. Unfortunately, my grandmother lives alone in a different city, and I received a call from the family doctor that she is in
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. I really need to look around her and live with her for a few days. I am really sorry about
this
whole situation, I hope you understand my family situation. I am about to return your
books
but I could not
due to
this
unfortunate situation.
However
, my friend has spare keys
of
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my house and she is a regular customer of yours . She would return all three
books
by the end of
this
week . Sorry for any inconvenience
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caused to you . If you have any questions , please reply to
this
email. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal kaur.
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task achievement
Elaborate a bit more on the solution you propose. Mentioning more specifics about your friend's delivery plans will strengthen the Task Achievement.
coherence cohesion
Improve logical structure by ensuring clear connections between paragraphs and ideas. Each paragraph should have a distinct focus.
task achievement
The letter includes a clear explanation of the situation, making it understandable for the reader.
coherence cohesion
The appropriate formal tone and respectful greetings and closing are well-maintained.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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