In many places, new homes are needed, but the only place available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What it your opinion about this?
It is very clear that, everyone should have house for living in the city or
countryside
. Nowadays, most of the buildings are constructed in cities and towns and no place is available to build new homes. While some people believe that not to build new comes in the countryside
and need to protect the area. In this
essay, I will support my view with examples.
Firstly
, cities or towns are fully occupied by homes, it is clear and no place to build new homes. The culture of the cities is occupied by all region people. For example
, if more people residing in a concrete jungle, then
it will impact to weather conditions. People clear all the trees and building the apartments and gated communities. As a result
, we cannot get pure breath and air pollution and sound will increase rapidly. Because it will effect to your health, mainly older people and children.
Secondly
, the rural area is the best place to leave. We need to protect the environment. For example
, if you live in outside of the cities, your lifespan will increase. If you look at a countryside
lot of greenery like public parks and forests. So you will get good air and very less pollution, either air or sound. The majority of the people like to live in a village. The countryside
people will do the farming. It will give more economic conditions of the country. If you start building the home in a village area, it will impact the environmental conditions.
In the conclusion, it is very clear to everyone's responsibility to protect the countryside
for our environment and not to build new homes. In my opinion, we should protect our country in all aspects like economical, environmental, and people's health. So not to encourage to build new homes in the countryside
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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- however
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