The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
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The maps illustrate how an
island
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has changed following the development of various facilities for visitors.
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, there have been significant constructions
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the
island
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in terms of accommodation and facilities for tourists. It is noteworthy that these developments have occurred without any noticeable damage to the trees. The length of the
island
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is over 1200 metres
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its width varies from about 200 to 500 metres in different places. Originally, there was a beach to the left of the
island
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, and the eastern and western parts were covered with woodland, apart from which the
island
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was completely bare. In comparison, swimming facilities have now on
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building
the beach.
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, the western woodland is surrounded by a series of huts which are connected to each other and to the beach via footpaths. There is
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a restaurant in the northern part which is connected to a reception building in the middle of the
island
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as well as a new pier to the south by means of a vehicle track.
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, a larger set of huts has been constructed between the reception and the eastern woodland.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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