Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, where people are overloaded with various stresses,

happiness

plays a crucial role to maintain the active lifestyle, which means not just being physically

fir

meeting adequate standards for a purpose

fit

but mentally as well. While some people argue that teenagers live a happy life without any burden on their shoulders, others are of the opinion that,

adulting

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makes them confident and satisfied.

This

essay shall discuss why childhood is not always like a

fairytale

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fairy tale

, and why I believe adulthood is more joyful. A common believe is that, every child must

had

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have

been a luxurious

childhood but

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childhood, but

most of the

children whether

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children, whether

in developed or developing countries often lack the experience of real

happiness

of being a teenager. Some children are blessed with financially stable family who looks after their child's every demand. Below poverty line or poor families,

for instance

, still struggle for their basic needs

such

as food, clothing and shelter. Even if they fulfil their daily basic amenities, these families have not

sense

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sensed

the feeling of a free hand when it comes to money matters.

Therefore

,

such

families could not even afford toys or video games which are essential for teenager's

happiness

in

this

rapidly growing world. Despite the rough teenage years, others believe, myself included, that being an adult gives much more satisfaction even if there are added responsibilities

such

as family and friends.

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To

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put in

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

words, after a certain age, individual

take

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takes

steps according to their capacity.

For instance

, an adult is often aware of what he or she can afford at the moment and

accordingly

alter their

mind

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minds

by making rational decisions.

Furthermore

, adulthood

always give

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always gives

the motive to do hard work and grab opportunities to feel the real

happiness

because of  their consistent efforts. In conclusion, even though few teenagers have a wonderful and stress free

childhood but

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childhood, but

I

strong

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strongly

believe that adulthood gives us the reason to celebrate our hard work and our achievements throughout the life.