Nowadays, schools in various parts of the world report that students tend to have behavioural problems. Unfortunately, this will make it harder for schools to educate students as problematic behaviours are likely to interfere with the education process.

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Nowadays, schools in various parts of the world are facing problems with

student’s

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

. There are several causes of

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concerning trend, but measures could certainly be taken to tackle the problem. There are some reasons why students behave inappropriately.

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, changing living styles and

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economic pressures affect

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student’s behavioral pattern

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the student’s behavioural pattern

student’s behavioural pattern

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example parents

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example, parents

might spend more time at work than at home and

as a

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result they

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result, they

don’t have enough time to pay attention to their children and

consequently

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lack of parental guidance and monitoring led to

behavioral

of or relating to behavior

behavioural

problems.

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Secondly

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Secondly, such

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behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

behaviours

might be caused by external influences, like social

medias

a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

and television.

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instance students

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instance, students

might be impressed violence that spread through these

medias

a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

mediums

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Therefore they

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Therefore, they

would show more aggressive

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

in educational institutions. In order to counter

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problems, parents and teachers must devote enough time to the student and understand their

strength

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strengths

and weakness. Teachers should be friendly with student while still maintain their primary role as a trainer. By

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way they might be able to understand

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student’s point

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the student’s point

of views and

as a result

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make better decisions through their education.

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Furthermore it

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Furthermore, it

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important to

emphasized

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emphasize

on physical activities like swimming, running and other sport, because help to channelize the energy of the students in a good manner. In conclusion,

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

problems result from the way society works like changing living styles and external influence

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as some TV programs.

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Nevertheless by

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Nevertheless, by

understanding the

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student’s

Suggestion

students’

views and guide their great energy to healthy exercises, students can gradually change and behave more appropriately.

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Nowadays, schools in various parts of the world report that students tend to have behavioural problems. Unfortunately, this will make it harder for schools to educate students as problematic behaviours are likely to interfere with the education process.

Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support.

In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Doctors recommend that older people should excersice regularly.However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?