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In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What are the reasons for this and how can it be solved?

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It is clear that a healthy life is important based on the how you are living. Nowadays, more health problems due to people choose to stay in unhealthy environments in many countries. In
this
 essay, we will discuss the reasons of unhealthy conditions and how it will solve.
Firstly
, most of the cities, people who are living in not the best environment
as a result
, they will get health problems very quickly.
For example
, people are living in a concrete jungle, they do not get purified air due to lack of trees. A lot of them using vehicles which emit more carbon-di-oxide and carbon monoxide. These two are very dangerous to cause lung cancer to infants and old age people. To solve
this
 kind of problems, the environment or surrounding where more people living area should have large parks, increase lot of trees and the
government
 should take
action
 on these. The
government
 should maintain greenery in the
city
 and install an air purifier everywhere in the
city
. The
government
 should take
action
 and control the air pollution from the vehicles. People should strictly maintain the vehicle pollution check.
Secondly
, slums in the
city
 need to be clean and clear to not get any diseases.
For example
, slums, having no drainage, people not maintained well.
As a result
, It causes unhealthy conditions for the people who are living in slums. The
government
 properly implements underground drainage everywhere in the
city
. If not implemented,
then
 all the roadblock with drainage water, it causes diarrhoea, malaria, dengue fever to the people. To solve
this
, the
government
 should take proper
action
 on drainages. At the conclusion, the
government
 should take
action
 on a healthy environment like proper drainages, large parks, maintain a greeneries in the
city
 to solve unhealthy conditions, which are impacted to people who are living in the area.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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