In some countries, university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

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In some countries students stay with their family
,
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so that they don't have to
baer
have
bear
the excess expenses that are being spent by them.
some
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Some
parents would want
to
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for
their children to be
in
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on
there
of them or themselves
their
site, so that the children would only go to university and come back native. The advantages of living away from their family
is
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are
that they can know if they are capable of living alone and can understand the current situation of
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market.They
have do
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have done
all the regular
course
a specific piece of work required to be done as a duty or for a specific fee
chores
that their family members would do for them when they were at
home
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.In some case the graduate would love to enjoy the city, the
student
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would do group studies and learn
alot
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a lot
of new things which are very astonishing to him.
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the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
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would be best for countries like USA & England and other nations
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
. The disadvantages of staying far from
home
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is
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are
that the
their
in or at that place
there
there there
are out of the parents
perview
be shown or be found to be
prove
. The chances of them getting spoilt are more
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,
so most of the parents in countries like
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a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
would prefer
there
of them or themselves
their
childeren
a young person of either sex
children
to be
in
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on
there
of them or themselves
their
site, so that the common expenses would be nullified. In some case, few children who stay far from
home
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would not study as well as the
student
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who stay at
home
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.In few Asian countries parents prefer
there
of them or themselves
their
childeren
a young person of either sex
children
to stay with them, so that
the
people in general
they
can know all the family situation and all the other things that happen
inside
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in
the family. In my perspective, the students who stay away from
home
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would excel and in a few
case
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cases
, it is the opposite. But if a
student
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stays
outside he
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outside, he
would face all the kinds of
probelems
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a general human being would face. The graduate life is meant where the
student
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would learn all the things related to his upcoming career and in some cases a few of them fail
also
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to learn the academic part and just the enjoy the university life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • independence
  • self-reliance
  • finance management
  • exposure
  • broaden horizons
  • open-minded
  • adaptability
  • conducive environment
  • isolation
  • homesickness
  • financial burden
  • household duties
  • academic responsibilities
  • personal growth
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