We are living in a throwaway society. Discuss the causes and problems.

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We are living in a throwaway

society

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now.There are many causes

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one of them is

eassy

posing no difficulty; requiring little effort

easy

internet

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access. Easy

internet

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access is one of the big

reason

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reasons

throwaway

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the throwaway society

a throwaway society

society

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Internet

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The internet

is very important and

usefull

being of use or service

useful

thing in our life if we utilize it properly.But most of us are not using

internet

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properly.In

this

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modern

world

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all things are open in front of you.There are two paths of

this

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world

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.Those are

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honesty and dishonesty.You are independent of choosing any

path

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.You have to choose the

path

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of honesty

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If you choose that you can make the proper use of

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internet

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the internet

.But if you choose another it will very harmful for you and

the

subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)

then

for the

world

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.But the matter of sorrow the most of

youths

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the youths

is choosing the

second

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path

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. Another cause of throwaway

society

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immorality

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immoral

.We all should learn morality from childhood from the family.But the problem is

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in the modern

world

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parents are so busy

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thats

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that's

why

the

people in general

they

can't give

time

objective case of they

them

to their

childern

a young person of either sex

children

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the children are not

gitting

the act of acquiring something

getting

the proper

etiquitee

rules governing socially acceptable behavior

etiquette

and morality in

ther

of them or themselves

their

her

the

childhood.For

this

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reason when they are growing up and they are

bocoming

according with custom or propriety

becoming

independent most of them are choosing

wrong

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the wrong path

path

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, means they are immoral activities.

Some time

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Sometime

they divert and doing terrorism activities. So if we want to

comeback

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come back

from

this

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problem we must have to teach morality and proper

etiquitee

rules governing socially acceptable behavior

etiquette

in the childhood.

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we can able to change

this

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society

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

237 words

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