Write a letter to the sports club president about conduct of an event. You are a member of that club. What is the event? Whom i am inviting? what is my role in this event?

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to apprise you of a sports event which I am planning to organize on 10th December. A football championship will be conducted on the club's main ground and all teams of our club will participate in

this

Although

, a condition of age is fixed for athletes, according to which no member

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above 28 years of age will be allowed to participate. I have already sent invitations to all team members and asked

willing

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the willing

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person

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people

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to send nominations by end of

this

week.

Additionally

Mr.

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Manoj Kumar, who is a former sports minister of Delhi will be invited as the chief guest to honour

this

occasion.

Entire

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planning and execution of

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competition will be taken care

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of by

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me. My counterpart Sehjad has agreed to assist me in arranging

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material and refreshments for the audience. I am really hoping that you will accord your approval for

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and will

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honour

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event with your presence. Yours faithfully Manju Kumari

Mon Oct 07 2019

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9 paragraphs

168 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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